Feedback

A fresh eye on some work is effective, as it gives new light (for advice) and after getting feedback from our teacher, it was shown that some of the clips did not make sense or did not relate to the narrative. It was said that our trailer was not clear on who and what was happening. Which is vital if we want the audience to have some sort of idea of the narrative of our trailer, even if not the full story, but at least a small instinct.
It was suggested that we remove, shorten and move certain clips to make the trailer more short and snappy.
This was taken into account and I began editing, to the new ideas and advice.
It was also said that we needed to re-film , our house as it was not mysterious or scary enough, and then put it into black and white, to contrast between the past and the present.